Posted by On to the weekly prompt from Trifecta. This week’s word comes from Karen is Muttering.
1 : of, relating to, or being a pedant(see pedant)
2 : narrowly, stodgily, and often ostentatiously learned
3 : unimaginative, pedestrian
I’ve mentioned this before but I prefer sticking to 33 words because I find it more of a challenge. In addition to that, I find shorter posts leave room for the imagination. This could be an exchange between a man and woman in more than one type of situation. I like letting the readers decide for themselves. 🙂
“This can’t continue,” he said.
Her response is quiet, barely a whisper, “I have disappointed you.”
Her acquiescence angers him, “There must be change! It’s all so pedantic! I can’t take it anymore!”
Hmmm…maybe it’s an abusive boss and an eager-to-please employee?
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Could be!
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Whiny, overbearing, dumb husband complaining about dinner.
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Another possibility!
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I find that 33 words is absolutely more of a challenge than 333. And you’re right – this leaves it open to our imaginations. My sister actually had a relationship like this – reversed. He agreed with everything, offered no opinions, and it drove her to distraction.
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I can understand your sister’s frustration. I prefer a man who can think for himself. No pushovers! Thanks for taking time to read my entry. Really appreciate it! 🙂
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They should try to change things up then! (: Nice little piece!
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Thanks! 🙂
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I wasn’t sure the first read, but the second time I realized how your piece gets right to the heart of the matter. Anyone, who is in a relationship with a person who always goes along and never has his/her own opinion, will know how frustrating and annoying it can be. Glad you challenged yourself to write the shortest story. Nicely done.
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Thank you! 🙂
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