Trifecta Challenge – Week 7: It Can’t Be…

This weekend’s challenge from Trifecta:

Give us a story or snippet of a story which includes, in exactly 33 words, a justified exclamation point.  Make us believe that your exclamation point simply needs to be in your story.  The writer with the most believable exclamation wins.

My entry:

A beautiful night, it should have been perfect.

Overcome by darkness, shadowed by fear I tried in vain to fight him.

Today, I got the call from my doctor.

NO!  It can’t be.

13 thoughts on “Trifecta Challenge – Week 7: It Can’t Be…

  1. Pregnant, VD, HIV, many possibilities. Loss of girlhood. Was this a rough lover, or molester? Good story, start of a novel perhaps? Evelyn

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