This weekend’s challenge from Trifecta:
Give us a story or snippet of a story which includes, in exactly 33 words, a justified exclamation point. Make us believe that your exclamation point simply needs to be in your story. The writer with the most believable exclamation wins.
A beautiful night, it should have been perfect.
Overcome by darkness, shadowed by fear I tried in vain to fight him.
Today, I got the call from my doctor.
NO! It can’t be.